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Trigun... - Brain Pain Fanfictions-OW, my head! My eyes!

elvenmoonOct. 30th, 2004 04:29 pm Trigun...

Title: Sacrifice

Author: geranium

Fandom: Trigun

Characters involved: Trigun cast

What It Is About: "This is after episode 26.Everything is going well. Vash is back,Knives isn't genocidal, and Meryl&Vash finally express their love.All was perfect until some bounty hunters show up."

Pairing(s): Vash/Meryl

Warnings: PG

Reasons: It could really use some proof reading, but it's not the worst I've seen

To her credit, she IS willing to take constructive crit :)

Sample:



After work Meryl went to the well to wait for Milly. Suddenly all the workers started scrambling out of the well followed by a fountain of water. Everybody was shouting and laughing. Meryl thought she saw a silhouette on the horizon. She turned around and saw him.He never looked so beautiful. As he got closer she could see someone slung over his shoulder.par

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"Milly..."Meryl stammered. Milly turned around.par

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"Mr. Vash!"she screamed. Vash started to wave and yelled,par

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"Hey there insurance girls!" Milly ran to him but Meryl couldn't move. She was frozen in place.par

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"He's back. He's really back," she thought. Suddenly she remembered how to move her legs and ran after Milly. When they reached Vash, Milly wrapped him up in a bear hug, ignoring the man on his shoulder.par

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"I'm happy to see you too, but Milly, I can't breathe." Vash choked.He was starting to turn blue from the lack of oxygen.par

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"Oh sorry!(!)" Milly dropped him. Meryl walked up and gave Vash a hug in spite of herself. She saw a wet spot on his shoulder. She reached up and touched it with her hand. When she looked at it, her hand was covered in blood.Vash's blood.par

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"Vash, your bleeding. We have to get that taken care of quickly." Meryl said. Concern evident in her voice.par

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"I just got wounded in battle. Meryl, Milly, this is my brother Knives." Vash said happily.par

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"Milly could you help me get him inside?" he asked.par

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"Sure Mr.Vash!" Milly exclaimed.par

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"Vash," Meryl said,"We need to get your wounds bandaged. Or else you might bleed to death. Here, let me help you inside."par

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"It's okay Meryl. I can walk."Vash said, flashing her one of his smiles.par

Current Mood: hungryhungry
Current Music: The TV downstairs

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