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elvenmoonNov. 14th, 2004 02:18 am

Title: The Ending [check it out at www.thepokemontower.com since I can't direct link]

Author: Angel Cleffa

Fandom: Pokemon

Characters involved: Ash, Misty

What It Is About: Ash and Misty head to Cerulean city... Misty gets kidnapped by a "Fearow" and Ash has to rescue her.

Pairing(s): Ash/Misty

Warnings: May sting or cause a severe brain implosion

Reasons: TERRIBLE spelling, bad structure, confusing as all get out!

Sample:





Mean while on Cinnabar Island...
Misty:Let go of me Fearow.Put me down this insteant!
Fearow droped Misty in a hole that was on top of the mountain on Cinnabar Island.
Misty:Wait not this HIGH!AHH!Ovfha.she said with a big slam on the hard ground of in side the mountian.
Misty:Owwwww!!!! That really hurt!
Misty started to recover and standed up to have a look around.
Misty:Where am i?
?????:Your inside the mountain on Cinnabar Island my dear...
Misty turned around then
??????:Disable!
Misty fainted with a loud smack on the floor.She was out like a light

Ash:Hey what about me?Get back to me sis.
Me:Cram it Ash ill get to ya in a min! Tiss little brothers...
Ash:Tiss Big sisters

Ok back to Ash... Ash:YAAAA! ^_^
Ash:Hurry Lapras, hurry.Huh... hmmm there it is.
*There it is...thats most likely where Misty is.I hope shes alright* Ash thought
Ash:Lapras return!
Ash ran towords the little village by the mountain side when a of a sudden the ground started to shack.
Ash:What the?
A hole came out of know where and Ash fell in it.
Ash:OWWWWW
Ash couldnt see anything when all of a sudden he saw the ground
Ash:AHHH THIS IS GANA HURT!
THOMP!!!!Ash fell on the ground.It must of hurt if i had to make that nosie.lol.
Ash:Owwww...huh where am i? Oh i must of fell though the hole in the ground.

Me:Tiss ya no dip Surlock!
Ash:Hey Molly Stop. Im gana tell mom you wont stop being mean to me!
Me:Well if you dont want to hear the rest of my fan fic than you can just go to bed with out a bed time storie.
Ash:NO wait! ill be quiet please tell me more!
Me:Sigh... ok

A light came on and Ash could see Misty lying on the ground.
Ash:Misty...
Ash ran towords her some how her body slid back a foot
Ash:What the?
Ash ran towords her again and her body started to slide on the ground going backwards.This time he didnt stop running then he tripped.
Ash:owww...
Smack. He feel on the floor and then looked up and saw some things feet
Ash:Who the...
Then he stoped

Current Mood: crappycrappy
Current Music: Snoring...

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Comments:

From:rosehiptea
Date:November 14th, 2004 01:33 pm (UTC)
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Well, that was incoherent. I can't tell the weird author's notes (those ARE weird author's notes, right?) from the fanfic.

I just hope the next part isn't "Prepare for trouble!"

Sigh.


From:yaminekohyousai
Date:May 20th, 2005 05:09 am (UTC)
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"Me:Tiss ya no dip Surlock!"

...what?